Editorial Facepalm O’ The Day

“You can rely on our firm to provide you with the assistance you need to secure the effective results which you can expect.”

I am not making this up.

What’s an editor to do?

Well, OK, I know what I am to do, because I already did it. What I’d really like to know is…

What would YOU do?



Filed under Nerd Candy, Rewrite

3 responses to “Editorial Facepalm O’ The Day

  1. Valkyrie Page

    If they demand you keep the line in, change it to:

    “We can help you reach your goals.”

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